Tuesday, October 9, 2007

contrast intro 1

I have three children a boy who is 5 years old a girl who is 2 and another girl who is 6 months. All of their personalities are so different you can really see it in my older two since my 6 month old Piper is just finding hers. Keaton my 5 year old is so cautious and caring and Marnie my 2 year old is a dare devil and loving they are like night and day. It is so fun to see them grow into there own personalities and how they can be so much alike but yet be so different.

1 comment:

johngoldfine said...

Both intros need the same thing--stronger hook that really invites the reader in, offers us a story or an image or something to keep us in the game--and a preview that really gives a brief idea of what areas of difference you'll be describing.